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Chapter 23: Kagerou Daze VIScans: xeshirefm0
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I tried bolding all the words this time so that it’s easier to read~
oh no yoU DONT TALK BAD ABOUT JIN IN YOUR TRASH WEBSITE
but it… wasn’t badly worded crit?
ok i get it seventhstyle is trash and some of the reviews they gave were unnecessarily harsh. but this was a really poor example to choose to like mock/get angry at because this is genuine criticism that’s well-worded and polite considering their past reviews. its tone is v objective when you take it out of context.
in all honesty, jin doesn’t have the experience in working with an anime. and having him handle all of the script is remarkably hard and we can admire his efforts. BUT—and this is a huge but—this doesn’t excuse him from genuine criticism. and the fact that his storytelling has been one of his weakest points is very true!
they admit that he has good ideas! they admit that it could’ve been well-done, only that they found his lack of experience to hinder the story’s delivery and that is very true. his song-writing skills imo are excellent, but his story desperately needs an editor more times than not.
please don’t get super defensive over a creator like this because this is criticism that he needs to hear. this is constructive and in no way was presented in a harmful manner. please don’t put him on a pedestal where he’s considered ~perfect~ and ~untouchable~ because nobody is that way. jin needs to know this in order to improve. i like jin and in all honesty if someone told me this i would be willing to take it as a polite review.
Sorry for posting my voice uwaaa;;; I followed Lia’s voice as I recorded this ;v; this sounds horrible I’M SORRY //hides
I really like this song;;; I hope the off-vocal comes out soon(did it already?) so lots of people could sing it!
people cropping mink out of official art
people drawing fanart/taking cosplay shots of everyone except mink and saying its “ALL the boyfriends”
people replacing mink with mizuki even though he isnt a romantic option
people pretending mink doesnt fucking exist when his role is important to the plot
people constantly excluding mink on purpose
if you’re a dog then i’ll consider it
Mekakucity Actors Opening 1 by Jin (Shizen no Teki-P) [Graffiti Ver.]